Wednesday, July 25, 2007

D#10, HW#6, Discussion

The transitional words I think would help my paper the most are:
  1. for instance
    • I think this would be used to add additional examples in my writing as to make my papers layout flow a little easier from paragraph to paragraph.
  2. in all fairness
    • I think I should use this one to better indicate when I am transitioning from the view I support to the opposing view as it's wording is easier than just stating the other view in my paper.
  3. as a result
    • I just think this sounds better than in conclusion.

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